Holistic Feedback Report

OverallSTUDENT17, on a scale of one to six, your response to this assignment was rated a 6. Your response was evaluated on the basis of how well it communicates its message considering important areas of writing including focus and meaning, content and development, organization, language use and style, and conventions and mechanics. A response that receives a score of six communicates its message very effectively. Typically, a response at this level clearly states the topic and purpose and maintains a single controlling point. The response is very cohesive and unified. A response at this level typically shows very effective development of ideas, with effective use of examples, evidence and/or supporting details. The response has a very effective organizational pattern. Ideas are well developed and clearly supported with details. The sentence structure is very effective, varied and free of errors. There is precision in usage and word choice as well as evidence of mastery of mechanical conventions such as spelling and punctuation. A more detailed analysis of your response is provided for each of the five important writing areas below. Writing Analysis Your response was also evaluated in terms of five important traits of writing, focus and meaning, content and development, organization, language use and style and mechanics and conventions. Each of the five areas was evaluated on a scale ranging from one to six.

homework

Have you ever experienced a natural disaster? What happened? Describe you experience.

Yes, I have experience in school. That day the building are just like dancing!It's too scare to me.

Which nature disaster do you think causes the most harm? Why?

Tsunami, because we can't prevent it before it comes.

Which one of these facts about trees is the most interesting to you? Why?

General Sherman,It's the world's largest tree.

Have you ever seen any fascinating or famous trees? If, so, describe them.

Ali Mountain wood,it's very tall and old.

Why was Operation Smile formed? Would you like to be a medical volunteer and help a child?

Help the children come from poor familiars who can't afford surgery.

How do you think children's lives are being changed after they have surgery for cleft lips?

I think the children will take a heart with appreciation.

A Psalm of Life

This semester, our teacher gives us a poem. It’s so good to us. Its topic is a psalm of life. It makes me so deep touching. Maybe I’m so young can’t comprehend what it mean. But I can understand that we have to be serious to face our life. We don’t waste the time to do anything without any help us. It let us know that we need a goal makes it. But I feel it just a goal. I think life must be happy. It’s enough.
Just like my college life, it’s training for me. I feel so tired and bitter. But the day has passed away. So I only have to do that just be happy.
My three strength, First, I think I am humor. I always take happy for everyone. Second, I am optimistic. Everything will be OK but our feeling must be happy. Third, I will take care everyone about my friend.
My three weakness, I can’t concentrate on one thing, I’m so easy to be distracted by the other things. Second, I’m not active to do something because I always forgives something. Third, I have to improve my personality. I think I can do better than ever.

ALCPT 15R

ALCPT 15R
1. Allen plays a different sport each season.
Which of these is a season?
2. Alice gave me part of her apple.
How much did she give me?
3. Baseball, football and basketball are popular sports.
But recently boating has become popular.
What has become popular lately?
4. When I told her the news, Mary began to cry.
How did Mary feel?5.
Who is usually most dependent on other people?
6. What did Harry need a battery for?
7. Humans are able to survive at very high altitude.
What can they do there?
8. Anna complained that she was starving.
What was she complaining about?
9. Frank walked quite a distance.
How far did he walk?
10. What is gasoline used for?
11. Walter has a good deal of cash on hand.
What does he have?
12. John and George want to take a walk after dinner.
What do they want to do after dinner?
13. Did the student cross out the incorrect answer?
14. Why did Virginia go to the dentist?
15. Did Robert motion to you?
16. Which date would be best for you?
17. Is your dog healthy?
18. Why do people look forward to holidays?
19. Did the fog bother you?
20. He wanted to study engineering. What did he want to know?
21. Did Donald wreck the truck?
22. What will Jane do with her new cabinet?23. Are you thirsty?
24. Mr. Stone ignores all his friends’ opinions. What did Mr. Stone do?
25. Where do we get on the bus?
26. It felt like a Canadian winter.
27. He noticed the mark right away.
28. Barbara considers her work a pleasure.
29. The father was severe with his child.
30. Joe’s eyes were badly damaged.
31. He could go with us if he wanted to.
32. The wire is twisted.
33. His stomach is full.
34. The volume over there is going to increase.
35. The fire spread.
36. Stick to your studies.
37. She is going to sing again.
38. The box is made of aluminum.
39. Mrs. Smith was looking for a new dress.
40. On this flag, each star stands for a state.
41. Mr. Candle keeps his tools in an orderly manner.
42. The water was transformed.
43. Many people settled in America.
44. Bob felt like a stranger at the meeting.
45. We were told to think it over before we decided.
46. He was disturbed by the noise.
47. Susan was carrying her baggage.
48. The commander observed a weakness in the enemy’s defense.
49. Don’t bother about the receipt.
50. The school has a new system for teaching students how to type.
51. W: What started all this?
M: Something highly flammable in the back room.
Q: What are they talking about?
52. W: Do you like it?
M: Yes, it’s delicious.
Q: What the man and woman probably talking about?
53. W: Where did you get those?
M: I got them from the library.
Q: What are the man and woman probably talking about?
54. W: Is that our train there?
M: Yes, we must hurry now.
Q: What must they do?
55. M: Where does John work?
W: He works in an automobile factory.
M: What are his duty hours?
W: He works from nine to five.
Q: When does John start his work everyday?
56. W: Have you finished the work yet?
M: All I have to do is take care of the lubrication.
Q: What does the man have to do?
57. W: Why can’t you let me in?
M: I forgot the key.
Q: Why don’t they go in?
58. W: Would you like more vegetables?
M: No, that’s sufficient, thank you.
Q: What did the man mean?
59. M: Do you agree with Oscar?
W: No, but I still like him very much.
Q: What is the woman saying about Oscar?
60. W: What would you like to eat?
M: Anything will be all right.
M: What did the man say?

ALCPT 16R

ALCPT 16R1. You should study your lesson in advance. When should you study your lesson?2. The trip was made over bumpy roads. What kind of road were they?3. They’re going to Dallas by plane. How are they going to Dallas?4. Claude ate some dessert at noon. What did he eat?5. The pilot can land now. What can he do?6. This student works independently of others. How does he work?7. Arthur would like to have a hamburger rather than a hotdog. What does he prefer?8. He has a spare room in his apartment. What does he have?9. The customs are different here. What are different?10. Arthur will be gone for an extended period of time. How long will he be gone?11. Mr. Smith asked Joe: “Do you have a bank account?” What did Mr. Smith want to know?12. There’s a large hole in the table cloth. What is the matter with the cloth?13. What is a pharmacist?14. The instructor talked to Nancy about her conduct. What did the instructor talk about?15. The boss arrived at exactly three o’clock. When did he arrive?16. Often while visiting another country, a person is not sure how to act when eating. What is meant by the expression “how to act” in this sentence?17. Did you find out what caused his illness?18. Mr. Maxwell said: “This wind feels just like a knife.” What kind of wind was it?19. Maurice finished his studies at a quarter to eight. When did he finish his studies?20. Highway accidents can be kept at a minimum if everyone follows safety rules. How can we minimize accidents?21. Did anyone of your friends call on you?22. The weatherman said it might rain tomorrow. What is the weather going to be like tomorrow?23. Peter quitted working after sunset. When did he stop?24. The driver reached his destination with very little gasoline in the tank. How did he arrive in his destination?25. Richard spends an hour each day in physical training. What does he do?26. Gerald kept working on the problem until he solved it.27. The judge is very concerned about traffic accidents.28. Blend’s home is air-conditioned.29. We have been here just ten minutes.30. When you go by air, you depend on the pilot to take you to your destination safely.31. Bob goes to the club every Friday night.32. The humidity is very high.33. This is not the right road.34. Some people like to argue all the time.35. The entire class is going on the tour.36. The students seem a little bored with the lesson today.37. Some students have trouble communicating.38. The motor sometimes gets overheated.39. This pencil is like that one.40. I have a date this afternoon.41. Henry said: “I will write twice a week on my trip.”42. The small fishing boat was anchored beside the big steamship.43. The patrol may encounter the enemy by tomorrow morning.44. The students are going to miss their train.45. Ralph needs to visit a dentist for treatment of his tooth.46. I don’t know about his problem, but I can guess what it is about.47. You must make your students study.48. This metal can be bent easily into any shape.49. He had a chance to see a good movie while he was in town.50. The rock crashed through the window.51. W: Did you see that ring around the moon last night? M: Yes, it was strange, wasn’t it? Q: What did they see last night?52. M: I hear your son is in the army. What is he now? W: A sergeant. Q: What rank is her son?53. M: Were the students on time for the examination? W: No, they were not. Q: What did the woman say about the students?54. W: Will you try to do this? M: I will if you’ll give me a hand. Q: How will the man try to do it?55. W: Where are you going, Bob? M: I’m going to have this suit pressed. Q: Where will the man have to go?56. W: Do you enjoy fishing? M: Yes, it’s my favorite sport. Q: What do we know from the conversation?57. M: Where is the table you want repair? W: Follow me to the back of the house. Q: What did the woman say?58. W: What’s the matter with Frank? M: He has hardly any money. Q: What did the man say about Frank?59. W: Do you need anything from the store? M: Yes, pick up a package of cigarette for me. Q: What did the man say?60. M: Do you know anything about Ronny? W: WeIl, I do know that he minds his father. Q: What did the woman say about Ronny?

An Unforgettable Holiday

On the Double Tenth Day, we have five days’ vacation, it’s my unforgettable holiday.
The first day night, my classmate and I went to eat a big dinner to celebration that we have five days’ vacation. After dinner, we went home to take a rest to prepare to follow at the heels of the four days.
The second day, I turned back to school to clear my room. It took me four hours to brush the paints, swept the floor, washed the window screens, scrubbed wherever you look. It let me very tired. In the evening, I had dine together, it’s my senior high school’s alumni association, I was so happy because I had long tine to see them.
The third day, I went to Ping Dung to go barbecue. It’s very special because it used stone plank. It’s not like using xylanthrax. It’s very fresh to me. We also went to see the fifth imposing waterfall in Taiwan, and we had playing in the water. When we ate all off food, we went to see night view. It’s very comfortable and freedom.
The fourth day, my old friend took me to KTV singing with two girls. I was so happy to see him, and also thanks he treated me to watch the movie.
The finally day, I chose the rest at home and adjusted my mood. The vacations will be over. I should pick up my play heart.
This five days is my unforgettable holiday.

My Favorite Sport

There are a lot of ways to make as healthier such as eating good food , living a regular life , and doing exercises. I like sports. It makes me healthy , and it is my interest. So, I love it.
There are many sports , such as jogging , playing balls , and so on .Swimming is my favorite sport. I enjoy staying in the water during the hot summer day. It’s uncomfortable to do any sport under the extremely hot summer. So, I like swimming. Swimming also makes my shape slender, increasing my energy. It’s so good to me.
My favorite sport is swimming. In order to improve my swimming skills, I join the school’s swimming team. I want to be the fastest one, so I learn the freestyle. I hope I can represent my school to competition. It’s my goal.If there is only one thing that I can do, I can not help but to choose swimming. The reason is easily to understood: I love swimming.