Holistic Feedback Report

OverallSTUDENT17, on a scale of one to six, your response to this assignment was rated a 6. Your response was evaluated on the basis of how well it communicates its message considering important areas of writing including focus and meaning, content and development, organization, language use and style, and conventions and mechanics. A response that receives a score of six communicates its message very effectively. Typically, a response at this level clearly states the topic and purpose and maintains a single controlling point. The response is very cohesive and unified. A response at this level typically shows very effective development of ideas, with effective use of examples, evidence and/or supporting details. The response has a very effective organizational pattern. Ideas are well developed and clearly supported with details. The sentence structure is very effective, varied and free of errors. There is precision in usage and word choice as well as evidence of mastery of mechanical conventions such as spelling and punctuation. A more detailed analysis of your response is provided for each of the five important writing areas below. Writing Analysis Your response was also evaluated in terms of five important traits of writing, focus and meaning, content and development, organization, language use and style and mechanics and conventions. Each of the five areas was evaluated on a scale ranging from one to six.

homework

Have you ever experienced a natural disaster? What happened? Describe you experience.

Yes, I have experience in school. That day the building are just like dancing!It's too scare to me.

Which nature disaster do you think causes the most harm? Why?

Tsunami, because we can't prevent it before it comes.

Which one of these facts about trees is the most interesting to you? Why?

General Sherman,It's the world's largest tree.

Have you ever seen any fascinating or famous trees? If, so, describe them.

Ali Mountain wood,it's very tall and old.

Why was Operation Smile formed? Would you like to be a medical volunteer and help a child?

Help the children come from poor familiars who can't afford surgery.

How do you think children's lives are being changed after they have surgery for cleft lips?

I think the children will take a heart with appreciation.